{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25227247","dateCreated":"1276691239","smartDate":"Jun 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25227247"},"dateDigested":1532128369,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Ending","description":"While I'm not sure that either J or E would be able to raise this child, the conclusion--their decision to give it a try--does make sense.  They will need a lot of help from J's mother.  Perhaps they'll find a way to make it work because they have no other choice.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nYou've done a great job with this assignment.  I know that the writing hasn't been easy for you, but you've worked steadily on this project and have ended up with a pretty neat story.  <br \/>\n<br \/>\nBe sure to print out a hard copy for yourself so you can re-read it in 5\/10\/20 years from now.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25204757","dateCreated":"1276611646","smartDate":"Jun 15, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25204757"},"dateDigested":1532128369,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"Giving her a chance to write out her thoughts is a great idea!  It will be a nice way to finish up your work on this story.  You've done a lot and tried a lot of different techniques.  This will be a neat one to end with.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25177011","dateCreated":"1276519407","smartDate":"Jun 14, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25177011"},"dateDigested":1532128369,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sunday","description":"I'm not sure if she's being idealistic or unrealistic at this point.  I have a hard time imagining her raising the child alone...but it certainly can be done.  She's got a lot to figure out.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25107967","dateCreated":"1276192372","smartDate":"Jun 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25107967"},"dateDigested":1532128369,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Thursday","description":"Your additions help me better understand her thinking; good going.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25107965","dateCreated":"1276192371","smartDate":"Jun 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25107965"},"dateDigested":1532128370,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Thursday","description":"Your additions help me better understand her thinking; good going.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25080111","dateCreated":"1276116529","smartDate":"Jun 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25080111"},"dateDigested":1532128370,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Wednesday's post","description":"Try to help me understand why J has made the decision that she's made.  What motivated her?  What are her thoughts about her child and her future?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25061011","dateCreated":"1276085477","smartDate":"Jun 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25061011"},"dateDigested":1532128370,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday","description":"Boy, you're not making it easy for poor Eric!  I like how you're up-ing the pressure; this keeps the story moving forward.  You're also continuing to do a good job of making your scenes last longer.  Nice going.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25032167","dateCreated":"1276011253","smartDate":"Jun 8, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25032167"},"dateDigested":1532128370,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"You've done a nice job of extending this scene.  Great going.  Now: keep doing this!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24998851","dateCreated":"1275925235","smartDate":"Jun 7, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24998851"},"dateDigested":1532128370,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sunday","description":"Slow down!  Just when you get a hot, angry, complicated argument started you let it end!  Take advantage of raw emotion.  Let it play out.  That's when interesting things happen: several minutes into a fight is often when the most interesting things get said.  So let your arguments go for a while.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24976411","dateCreated":"1275831741","smartDate":"Jun 6, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24976411"},"dateDigested":1532128371,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Friday\/Saturday","description":"The IM moves the story along...but it seems like the two boys need a way to talk for longer.  Will you get them together?  He has to deal with some heavy stuff right now; it would help if we could see his mind struggling with his fears, his concerns, his wishes, his frustrations, etc.  Get us inside his (and her!) brain!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}