{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25227143","dateCreated":"1276690769","smartDate":"Jun 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25227143"},"dateDigested":1532128352,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Ending","description":"No "happily ever after" for you! I've always hated Dan and never trusted him, so, while Karen's decision to dump him seems a bit rash, I say, "good riddance." I can tell you had fun writing this ending. It's a twist only you would think of.
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\nCongratulations on reaching the end.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25208173","dateCreated":"1276620561","smartDate":"Jun 15, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25208173"},"dateDigested":1532128352,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"Way to go! I totally didn't expect this, and it makes perfect sense. Where you thinking about this all along? I thought you were at a dead end with your story, but you found a way to open it up again and make it work.
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\nI'm impressed!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25176893","dateCreated":"1276518914","smartDate":"Jun 14, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25176893"},"dateDigested":1532128352,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sunday","description":"I'm not quite sure what G doesn't know about. He knows that D is his dad and that he is dating his mom. What's left?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25187115","body":"my climax..i can't say","dateCreated":"1276542374","smartDate":"Jun 14, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"michela_moscufo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/michela_moscufo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"25132385","dateCreated":"1276264170","smartDate":"Jun 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25132385"},"dateDigested":1532128352,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Thursday","description":"I'm still skeptical about Dan, but who can explain love, right? I can't imagine that this is going to end up well. G seems way too unstable and angry for things to work out, and K doesn't seem able to think fully rationally about this situation. I get the sense that you're moving toward the climax of your story.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25079765","dateCreated":"1276115981","smartDate":"Jun 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25079765"},"dateDigested":1532128352,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Wed","description":"I can't imagine that G will be happy with what he discovers. Is (was) D married? I thought he was. Perhaps not.
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\nI'll be interested to see how G and D deal with each other.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25028837","dateCreated":"1276006131","smartDate":"Jun 8, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25028837"},"dateDigested":1532128352,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"OK, two problems I have with Dan:
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\n1. He ditched Karen after fathering twins. Can you imagine how hellish it must have been to raise twins alone???? How can she be so willing to overlook this?
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\n2. What kind of relationship could they build with K hiding the fact that Cam has been murdered? Wouldn't D have heard about it in the paper? does K really think she can keep it from him for very long?
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\nTwo interesting problems for you to work through.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24996227","dateCreated":"1275919225","smartDate":"Jun 7, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24996227"},"dateDigested":1532128352,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sunday night","description":"Ah, the angry G. is back. Seems like you're ready to move Karen on with her life. Dan? Someone else?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24984549","dateCreated":"1275870284","smartDate":"Jun 6, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24984549"},"dateDigested":1532128353,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sunday","description":"I'm assuming that G has no idea that Dan is his real father, right? Does he at least know that Chris is his step-dad? Is the relationship with Chris really totally over, or is the marriage just on the rocks, faltering slowly? If Dan is happily married, that will complicate things...in an interesting way.
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\nDoes G feel at all guilty about killing his brother? Before, mom seemed to feel some guilt for how she treated G when he was young. Does she still feel this way?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24874433","dateCreated":"1275493199","smartDate":"Jun 2, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24874433"},"dateDigested":1532128353,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday","description":"Nice twist! The Dan angle opens up a lot of possibilities, and your description of her reaction to the birth also has potential. I find it hard to believe that G will get out of jail, but who knows? Perhaps there's a way for him to plea temporary insanity. Having him out and Dan back in the picture might make for some interesting times.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24850447","dateCreated":"1275429666","smartDate":"Jun 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24850447"},"dateDigested":1532128353,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"weekend post","description":"You may have put your characters into a box: there's not much room for them to move, as you mentioned in class. They can wallow in pity for a while, but that won't sustain the story. They are very focused on their emotional reactions to what's gone down. What you need is some action.
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\nPrison break?
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\nIf you don't want to go that direction, you might consider allowing mom to take some action to develop her own life. She seems stuck in a pretty unhappy situation and she's pretty much given up on her husband. Something might happen with that.
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\nWhatever way you go, some action needs to happen to get the plot moving again.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}