{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25227625","dateCreated":"1276692775","smartDate":"Jun 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25227625"},"dateDigested":1532128377,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday","description":"OK, now you've filled in that gap. I now know what happened to him.
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\nWhich leaves me with only one, final question: what will they discover when they hook up the machine and start listening to the waves?
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\nYou CANNOT end this without letting me know!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25237859","body":"so you want me to finish it?","dateCreated":"1276717780","smartDate":"Jun 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"nikitaalimov","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/nikitaalimov","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"25208321","dateCreated":"1276620902","smartDate":"Jun 15, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25208321"},"dateDigested":1532128377,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"I'm dying to find out what happens when they turn this thing on. What will they be able to decipher from the strange rays that it will capture? I hope you get to this part.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25168683","dateCreated":"1276471227","smartDate":"Jun 13, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25168683"},"dateDigested":1532128378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sunday","description":"Will it work? You've left off at a very suspenseful moment. What will the messages reveal? what will they be about?
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\nWill we ever learn what happened to him? That question is still hanging over the story, isn't it?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25137513","dateCreated":"1276276542","smartDate":"Jun 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25137513"},"dateDigested":1532128378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Thursday","description":"You've fallen behind a bit, but I'm sure you'll catch up over the weekend (right?). I'm getting the sense that this will all come together soon...I'm just not sure how. Be thinking about how to hit the climax of your story over the weekend at some point. This would be a good, final writing challenge for you.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25164419","body":"It's due tuesday though, right?","dateCreated":"1276450521","smartDate":"Jun 13, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"nikitaalimov","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/nikitaalimov","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"25032091","dateCreated":"1276011135","smartDate":"Jun 8, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25032091"},"dateDigested":1532128378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"Quite a romance you're starting off here. I was a little confused when you jumped from past to present, but I eventually figured it out. Try to be a bit more careful about your paragraphing and sectioning. Toward the end, you start to put way too much in single paragraphs, making it hard to follow the thread of your writing. It's always better (in this sort of writing) to have short paragraphs rather than long ones.
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\nI'm eager to see how the different threads of this story will come together. I sort of see where you're going with this, but I'm not positive yet, and this is what makes it interesting to read.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24844717","dateCreated":"1275418332","smartDate":"Jun 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24844717"},"dateDigested":1532128378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Weekend","description":"I really like how the pieces are starting to fit together but how they don't quite all match up yet. This is what keeps me reading. I have lots of questions about what happened...and this, too, keeps me reading. I'm especially curious to see what he'll say to the woman he nearly killed, and I also wonder about how his life has fallen apart.
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\nDon't rush to answer these questions! Good novels leave questions hanging for as long as possible; they are what drive the plot.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24826525","dateCreated":"1275395246","smartDate":"Jun 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24826525"},"dateDigested":1532128378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"credit for second deadline","description":"45\/45 (4500 new words)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24718307","dateCreated":"1274984882","smartDate":"May 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24718307"},"dateDigested":1532128378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Thursday's post","description":"Interesting way to meet a woman! Not one that I would recommend. Again, I like how you move back and forth between past and present, and I'm eager to see how they will fit together...eventually. I'm still not quite clear about what's making this guy so angry, but perhaps that will be revealed soon, too.
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\nI'm interested in seeing the repercussions of this first "date."","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24709143","dateCreated":"1274976811","smartDate":"May 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24709143"},"dateDigested":1532128378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Wednesday's post","description":"Sounds like this guy is angry and ready to explode. I'm expecting something big to happen. I like how you're filling in the background details with these flashback memories. It's slowly filling in the picture, giving me HINTS about what's up but not giving too much away. I have the sense that you've got a grand plan for this and are playing your cards close to your chest...perfect.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24604401","dateCreated":"1274815779","smartDate":"May 25, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24604401"},"dateDigested":1532128378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday post","description":"I like how so much is mysterious here. At this point, we want to know, "What was it that happened to this guy?" I like that fact that you're not telling us yet. This question propels your story forward.
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\nGive some thought to breaking up your narrative with dialogue and some more developed scenes. Right now, you move from scene to scene pretty quickly, not really giving me enough time to get into your character. Slow down!
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\nGlad you're getting going. You have a great imagination, and I'm very much looking forward to reading this as it develops.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}