{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25226987","dateCreated":"1276690333","smartDate":"Jun 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25226987"},"dateDigested":1532128381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday","description":"Great ending! I'm glad you came back to the courtroom scene; you have done an especially good job with this part of the story. You were able to tie everything together in a way that was both logical AND surprising, and you kept me guessing nearly to the end.
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\nWhat I liked best was how you keep the plot going. It was complicated, with lots of unexpected twists, and that made it fun to read. I hope it was as much fun to write.
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\nMake sure you print out a hard copy of this for yourself. It will be fun to come back to in 5\/10\/20 years.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25203279","dateCreated":"1276607616","smartDate":"Jun 15, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25203279"},"dateDigested":1532128381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sunday","description":"Almost there. I get the sense that this re-enactment will work just as planned. I'm glad--as you're racing towards the conclusion--that you're still making time to include humorous dialogue to lighten (and humanize) the story. This helps.
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\nI eagerly away the final chapter.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25166389","dateCreated":"1276461693","smartDate":"Jun 13, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25166389"},"dateDigested":1532128381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sunday","description":"Interesting developments. I'm not sure how they'll pull off the re-enactment, but perhaps it will work. Seems like you're moving to the climax of your story.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25186819","body":"I feel like my climax is gonna be later, because once there is enough proof it's gonna have a fast ending. b\/c all the pieces will come together quickly.","dateCreated":"1276541626","smartDate":"Jun 14, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"blaz1193","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/blaz1193","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"25131991","dateCreated":"1276263349","smartDate":"Jun 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25131991"},"dateDigested":1532128381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Thursday","description":"So much for his big break. You're making it very tough for poor Eddie. He can seem to get anything going his way. This is a tough case!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25079245","dateCreated":"1276115307","smartDate":"Jun 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25079245"},"dateDigested":1532128381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Wednesday's post","description":"I'm not quite sure how this will crack the case open, but I'm willing to wait until the next installment. I get the sense that you've got something up your sleeve.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25061619","dateCreated":"1276087363","smartDate":"Jun 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25061619"},"dateDigested":1532128381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday","description":"I liked the scene with his mom; it helped develop him in greater depth and helped to fill in the world of the story a bit. Keep trying this conversation strategy.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25038449","dateCreated":"1276021175","smartDate":"Jun 8, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25038449"},"dateDigested":1532128381,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday","description":"A lead! Now Jameson has something to investigate.
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\nAre you going to stick with the tight focus on this one point of view? Or are you going to take us outside of the jail so we can see J at work?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25028599","dateCreated":"1276005649","smartDate":"Jun 8, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25028599"},"dateDigested":1532128382,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"OK. Now you're moving forward again. Nice going. The conversation scenes work really well. You know how to use dialogue to expose and develop character, and I urge you to keep trying them. How about one with the lawyer? or perhaps more courtroom stuff? Might someone come visit him in prison?
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\nYou've got a central problem to work with here: will he get off from the charge? That should give you plenty to work with for the rest of the novella.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24826449","dateCreated":"1275395130","smartDate":"Jun 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24826449"},"dateDigested":1532128382,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"credit for second deadline","description":"30\/45 (3000\/4500 new words)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24755899","dateCreated":"1275067511","smartDate":"May 28, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24755899"},"dateDigested":1532128382,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Friday's post","description":"I like how you're keeping us in the dark and slowly revealing details. Great suspense! I know there's more to the story.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}