{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25227205","dateCreated":"1276691034","smartDate":"Jun 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25227205"},"dateDigested":1532128383,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Ending","description":"So, dogs are the only ones you can really trust, right?<br \/>\n<br \/>\nYou were pretty rough on this guy!  He finally finds happiness after his life falls apart and you kill off this happiness in a car crash? Mean!<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI'm glad you found a way to make this assignment work for you.  You wrote a clever story that was fun for me to read, and that was the main goal here.  I'm glad you didn't give up in frustration.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nDo you own a dog?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25245365","body":"I do own a dog and it is a German Shepherd, but the reason for the bad ending was that I was in a bad mood when I planned out the ending on Sunday night, so it ended up being a rough ending.","dateCreated":"1276736493","smartDate":"Jun 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"nickpage","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/nickpage","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"25207977","dateCreated":"1276620034","smartDate":"Jun 15, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25207977"},"dateDigested":1532128383,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"Can it all really be just a dream?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25176971","dateCreated":"1276519230","smartDate":"Jun 14, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25176971"},"dateDigested":1532128383,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sunday","description":"Wow.  Talk about a bad day...<br \/>\n<br \/>\nNow that things have fallen apart, will there be any way to pull them back together?  Are you going to leave this guy in total despair or will there be some relief before you end this piece?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25137417","dateCreated":"1276276268","smartDate":"Jun 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25137417"},"dateDigested":1532128383,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Thursday","description":"And so his world continues to fall apart.  What's next?  Be thinking about how (in the time you have left) you can bring this story to some sort of a climax.  That would give you a final writing challenge before you run out of time.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25102035","dateCreated":"1276181175","smartDate":"Jun 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25102035"},"dateDigested":1532128383,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Wednesday night","description":"I'm surprised that the neighbor was so understanding and willing to assume the responsibility.  I thought he might be angry: now he has to deal with the puppies.  Everyone is so nice in your story!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25079919","dateCreated":"1276116246","smartDate":"Jun 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25079919"},"dateDigested":1532128383,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Wednesday's post","description":"So...things are beginning to unravel.  Poor guy.  It's going to be a rough day.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25061209","dateCreated":"1276085984","smartDate":"Jun 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25061209"},"dateDigested":1532128384,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"tuesday","description":"OK, steady progress here.  One thought: so far, most of what has happened in your story has been very realistic and without any huge surprises.  I wonder if this might be part of what is making this so hard to write.  No need to change from this, but at least CONSIDER the possibility of something odd or bizarre or strange happening.  It might give you an energy that might allow you to write more easily.  MAYBE.  No aliens need to land, but you might give some thought to a suggest plot twist, just to see how that might effect your writing.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25031743","dateCreated":"1276010510","smartDate":"Jun 8, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25031743"},"dateDigested":1532128384,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"Is the branch the thing that will ignite this story?  Time for something big.  I HOPE you're getting there with this development.  You really need some drama to get the next section of your story rolling.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24874265","dateCreated":"1275492877","smartDate":"Jun 2, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24874265"},"dateDigested":1532128384,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday","description":"Like the claw idea.  Dog saliva is not my favorite.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24844179","dateCreated":"1275417482","smartDate":"Jun 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24844179"},"dateDigested":1532128384,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"weekend post","description":"This new section is quite well written.  I like how you're able to shift the focus back and forth between the dogs and the men talking.  This makes the story very cinematic and fun to imagine.  I also like the final image of the sky.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nIt's clear that the job stress hanging over his head will be important for the next phase of the story.  Do you know what will happen yet? Try to plan this out a little so you know where you'll be going with this.  LOTS of possibilities.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}