{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25155737","dateCreated":"1276385633","smartDate":"Jun 12, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25155737"},"dateDigested":1532128385,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Saturday","description":"Bravo! Case closed. You captured the Columbo ending perfectly: the bluffing, the play the fool, the trapping of the guilty party...nice going. While your raced through this final section a bit quickly, you certainly did enough to clearly catch the poor guy and have fun doing it.
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\nYou've done a great job with this project. You've produced a long piece of writing that you clearly enjoyed composing, and that was the #1 objective. Let's find some time next week so that you can print it out in the lab. You should have a hard copy of this to keep somewhere. It will be a fun token from the year.
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\nCongratulations.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25155787","body":"Thank you so much! This has been one of my favorite English assignments ever, and it's a shame that only one Sophomore English class gets to do this.","dateCreated":"1276385976","smartDate":"Jun 12, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Morris_G","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Morris_G","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"25132491","dateCreated":"1276264484","smartDate":"Jun 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25132491"},"dateDigested":1532128385,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Thursday","description":"I like the milk trick; good thinking. I'm not sure I follow the cremation question, though. Perhaps you'll reveal that in the next chapter.
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\nClearly you're moving to the climax of the story. Take your time with this! If you have time, build up the suspense as much as you can before you solve the crime.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25079859","dateCreated":"1276116120","smartDate":"Jun 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25079859"},"dateDigested":1532128385,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Wednesday","description":"He's on it! Now you're moving directly into the climax. See if you can set this up in a dramatic (and satisfying) way.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25061279","dateCreated":"1276086229","smartDate":"Jun 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25061279"},"dateDigested":1532128385,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday","description":"Burton's temper is giving him away; don't make it so obvious!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25032447","dateCreated":"1276011794","smartDate":"Jun 8, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25032447"},"dateDigested":1532128385,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"The haircut! Brilliant! Really great idea. It's always the little things, isn't it. I like how you've walked through this slowly and carefully and how you've left yourself plenty more to write. He's now got the direction, but there's plenty more to still figure out. Nice turn of events. Now you've begun the assent of your story towards the climax. Bravo.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24952143","dateCreated":"1275680914","smartDate":"Jun 4, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24952143"},"dateDigested":1532128386,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Friday's post","description":"Interesting! the lines start to come together! I like the fact that you're developing this story from a different angle now, and it will be fun to see how the pieces slowly come together. You have a lot still to work out back in the US, but you'll get there.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24854635","dateCreated":"1275438517","smartDate":"Jun 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24854635"},"dateDigested":1532128386,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday","description":"I like how you've framed this new post. Also, giving the detective someone to play off of, someone to talk with, will give you a lot more to write about. Good idea. Today, they make an interesting team.
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\nI like how you're moving through the early stages of the case with care and caution. No need to race here. Keep us aware of what's going on in Paris, just so we don't lose that thread. You've got to keep in the air here, and this is what's making it fun to follow.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24843721","dateCreated":"1275416931","smartDate":"Jun 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24843721"},"dateDigested":1532128386,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Weekend post","description":"Ah, the open door. No murder is ever perfect, it it. You continue to do a great job with the detective voice; it's clear that you hear it in your head. I'll be interested to see how you get him to trip the man up, but that will come, in time. The dog was an interesting detail, too.
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\nTake some time to plan out your next few moves. At this point, you're approaching 1\/2 way, so you want to know where you're headed. I get the sense you have an idea, but it might be worth making a quick plan, if you've not done so already.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24826365","dateCreated":"1275395001","smartDate":"Jun 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24826365"},"dateDigested":1532128386,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"credit for second deadline","description":"45\/45 (4500 new words)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24755397","dateCreated":"1275066942","smartDate":"May 28, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24755397"},"dateDigested":1532128386,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Friday's post","description":"Got it; all is clear now. I can totally hear Peter Falk in the voice in this new material. It's going to be a fun unraveling of the mystery.
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\nWill we get to hear more about\/from the drug dealer?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"24780331","body":"Possibly, I haven't really decided what to do with him. He's a great character but his relevance to the story may not be great enough at this point that I can cover him in my fifty pages.","dateCreated":"1275187610","smartDate":"May 29, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Morris_G","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Morris_G","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}