{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25137653","dateCreated":"1276276886","smartDate":"Jun 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25137653"},"dateDigested":1532128388,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Thursday","description":"It's just like in Star Wars! Luke realizes that Darth Vader is his father! How cool--the feminist version (or the female version, anyway). Lots of smashing and slashing and slicing and dicing here; I get the sense that you're having fun--and rolling into the climax as well.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25102845","dateCreated":"1276182322","smartDate":"Jun 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25102845"},"dateDigested":1532128388,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Wednesday's post","description":"Great job of moving towards the climax! The V's are totally gross, but you've made good use of them; it was quite a fight scene. I like how you've set up the heroine's quest: she's now ready for the final challenge...which, based on your last few lines here, sounds like it won't be an easy one.
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\nI'm eager to see what happens in this final battle.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"25033593","dateCreated":"1276014159","smartDate":"Jun 8, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25033593"},"dateDigested":1532128389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Monday","description":"Another possibility (re. your response to my last comment): perhaps if they can kill the leader, the entire colony will dissolve into chaos, leading to their defeat.
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\nJust a thought.
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\nI like how you're not making it easy here. Every step forward is met by a new complication. Perfect.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24976353","dateCreated":"1275831427","smartDate":"Jun 6, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24976353"},"dateDigested":1532128389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"weekend post","description":"Will this small team really be able to defeat the entire nation? You've set up quite a battle, but, on the surface, this band of friends seems kind of foolish...but perhaps the G's aren't as strong and smart as they might appear.
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\nNice job of moving directly into the main conflict. This battle can certain drive the middle portion of your story. In these new sections, you are moving a bit more rapidly through plot than you were earlier; slow down, if you can. Still plenty of writing time to go.
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\nAgain, I'm not sure how this group will have a chance, but perhaps you have more confidence in them than I do at this point. Onward!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25014889","body":"ooh, good point. it was in my mind, but i guess i never got around to actually writing it down. here's the thing, since the GLockspores took over Mars just that night before, there isnt actually many of them there, so its pretty much a matter of stealth. and finding the leader and figuring out what to do. and obviously protecting their leader is top priotory, but they think the Venids (freaky demon things) will protect them, but Piper is immune to them cause they can't make her blind.
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\ni'll fix this in my story.","dateCreated":"1275961026","smartDate":"Jun 7, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"lwong767","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/lwong767","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"24901263","dateCreated":"1275563566","smartDate":"Jun 3, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24901263"},"dateDigested":1532128389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Wednesday's post","description":"You're quite the romance writer. It's clear that you were having fun with this new scene. You have a nice touch when it comes to teen-age romance.
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\nSeems like something big is about to happen, which is exactly where you should be at this point. I'm eager to see what is appearing on the TV.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24874141","dateCreated":"1275492630","smartDate":"Jun 2, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24874141"},"dateDigested":1532128389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Tuesday","description":"I'm a little confused. I thought Bri was encouraging the relationship? Didn't she disappear at a significant moment to allow the two to be together? No fair that she's jealous now.
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\nI like how you've been able to weave in background info about the invaders and the destruction into the personal conversations. This makes the conversations much more realistic and engaging. It gives them something to talk about. I'm not quite sure what's coming next (we'll talk about this in class on Thursday), but I think that's OK.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24826307","dateCreated":"1275394887","smartDate":"Jun 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24826307"},"dateDigested":1532128389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"credit for second deadline","description":"45\/45 (4500 new words)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24761203","dateCreated":"1275074510","smartDate":"May 28, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24761203"},"dateDigested":1532128389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Friday's post","description":"Neat idea moving back and forth in the narration. Also good idea keeping the flashback short. This keeps your story moving forward and keeps it focused.
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\nI also get the sense that this story is going somewhere, that it's eventually building to a big battle to come (somewhere in the future), and that's great, too. No need to rush into anything, but having a clear direction is a good idea at this point.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24744729","dateCreated":"1275053235","smartDate":"May 28, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24744729"},"dateDigested":1532128389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"more thursday","description":"Boys, boys, boys: always so obnoxious, don't you think?
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\nYou're clearly having fun with this scene, and I can tell you're going to enjoy developing this relationship. (I can't remember who Morgan is, though.)
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\nSounds like the guy will have interesting stories to tell from his time on Mars. Will you let them chat about this?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24721719","dateCreated":"1274991435","smartDate":"May 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24721719"},"dateDigested":1532128390,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Thursday's post","description":"Fun new section. You're letting the girls be...girls, and this brings them alive. I really like your ideas about her special powers, and I'll bet that this will be important for the rest of the story.
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\nWill this cute guy be important?
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\nI like how you're slowly revealing details about the situation and about this world rather than throwing it all at me at once. This is keeping me curious.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}