{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25187835","dateCreated":"1276544506","smartDate":"Jun 14, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jakec_fischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jakec_fischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25187835"},"dateDigested":1532128397,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Great story so far...","description":"I actually think this is pretty creative, but I understand what you mean when you say that you incorporate parts of everything you've read and then twist it to come up with ideas.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nIt will be interesting to see how the story ends up when you reach the 14k wordcount.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24853885","dateCreated":"1275437211","smartDate":"Jun 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Morris_G","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Morris_G","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24853885"},"dateDigested":1532128397,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Where this is going","description":"Your story is great, I'm just wondering, you are half way through this story and your detective is still completely clueless (literally). You probably know where you are going with this, but I'm just wondering how smooth his solving of the mystery would be compared to the rest of the story. Right now, it seems a bunch of things could be the rising action, but they could also be part of the exposition. You probably have a planned out story, but I'm just wondering if it will fit in the amount of space left.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"24720937","dateCreated":"1274989616","smartDate":"May 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Morris_G","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Morris_G","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24720937"},"dateDigested":1532128397,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"New chapter","description":"This time in their interaction, Mr. Yardley is surprised and flustered by Mr. Slade. Before, Mr. Yardley was angry at Mr. Slade.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nWhat type of person are you trying to convey Mr. Yardley to be? Why would he only be surprised this time and not outraged by Mr. Slade's visit? If he had something to hide before, why not now?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"24728639","body":"Good question!  This is a first draft problem.  When I wrote the second interaction I could hardly remember the first one.  You're a very careful reader--darn you!","dateCreated":"1275004107","smartDate":"May 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Misterfischer","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Misterfischer","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1259541818\/Misterfischer-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"24444111","dateCreated":"1274411532","smartDate":"May 20, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Morris_G","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Morris_G","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/bhsnovellas.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24444111"},"dateDigested":1532128397,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"I'm not sure if you were trying to do this.....","description":"After the first chapter, I just thought that Mr. Slade woke up from a dream while being passed out. I thought that when he saw her walking wobbly through the room it was because he was drunk and everything was spinning.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI don't know if you were trying to maybe make it seem like it could be either, and if not, it may just be me, I don't know. Just something to consider clarifying if you weren't intending on doing what I mistook it to be.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nStill, it's pretty excellent. Great job so far.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}